it felt like being born again,
to feel you within me;
beneath my skin
and spilling out my pores.
it almost felt like dying.
that gap in time when
everything stands s t i l l
and seems almost peaceful.
it felt like winter again;
tracing shadows of crooked trees
on your outstretched limbs
and
tracing shadows of your crooked contour
on the horizon where the
earth meets the sky and the
sky finds the sea.
it was the first time i could feel.
something so electric; my senses
scattered in euphoria.
outer space never seemed so dull
until i saw the shine of your eyes.
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glad you enjoyed the rest, dear.
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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
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scratch it too much, and it will either spread or bleed...
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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
until i saw the shine of your eyes."
YES.
best line ever. could have come off in some other context as a sort of cheesy pick up-line or some shit, but you pulled it off.
what a way to punctuate
nice work overall
peace peace
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Life's ILL...SOMEtimes LIFE MIGHT KILL
-Vordul Mega
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scratch it too much, and it will either spread or bleed...
im glad you enjoyed this dear...and will you be submitting anything sometime soon?
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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
soon, yes.
if i could get half the shit that goes thru my head on paper i'd drop volumes daily. but certain things hinder my drive and often my memory (u know)
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Life's ILL...SOMEtimes LIFE MIGHT KILL
-Vordul Mega
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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
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