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now.what. by ~Deathstarr:iconDeathstarr:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


with no stars to set my eyes lazily upon,
to gaze at pensively
as my only consolation,
i guess i might settle for you.

i hadnt ever stopped to count your flaws,
to memorize every niche
where i may crawl inside you.
once i had i knew what sadness was.
©2006-2009 ~Deathstarr
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Author's Comments

; this will be incomplete until i am completed.

Comments


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~Synnestarr Nov 19, 2006, 12:34:31 AM
i lurve the 'authors comment.'

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scratch it too much, and it will either spread or bleed...
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~Deathstarr Nov 19, 2006, 5:39:18 AM
:D its the truth!

thanks for the comment, dear.

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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
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~glarawen Nov 20, 2006, 9:29:37 AM
I hope this poem is never finished then because what would life be if you became whole. A lovely piece of verse. It makes me infinately sad to read, but seems to make me face a harsh truth. :+favlove:

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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
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~Deathstarr Nov 20, 2006, 12:28:08 PM
it is a rather sad reality i am being forced to face now...but im glad i could express that clearly. thanks much for the comment dear.

:heart:

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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
:iconsynnestarr:
~Synnestarr Nov 20, 2006, 1:52:00 PM
anytime :]

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scratch it too much, and it will either spread or bleed...
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Mood: Love ~starsdie Nov 21, 2006, 7:22:03 AM
clever! i love it
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~Deathstarr Nov 22, 2006, 4:24:28 PM
:D

thanks doll. its much appreciated.

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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
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~ConcreteDreamer Nov 23, 2006, 10:05:13 PM
who's completed?
--be back soon

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Life's ILL...SOMEtimes LIFE MIGHT KILL
-Vordul Mega
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~Deathstarr Nov 24, 2006, 7:31:23 AM
yes come back.
post new words.
pleeeeease. :D


thanks for the comment, boo. :peace:

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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.
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